Poetry Day 2: Gift, Acrostic, Simile
(I omitted the simile as it felt a little forced with this one)
Given – yet never promised to last,
Infinitely eternal once existence has passed.
Forever, it seems, may simply cease to exist
Treasure life’s brevity, for it is truly a…
Dear Dad 
Hayley, as relates to your partner – perhaps his gifts are not the same as yours. But if you love him, he must have some gifts of his own.
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This is so heartfelt!
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thank you ❤ xx
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Leaving off that last word was a stroke of genius – cease to exist. Brilliant.
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Thank you! I hoped people would notice that the final word was the acrostic (my partner didn’t – he asked why I didn’t finish my line) hehe xx
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beautiful. so touching!
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Well crafted! Lovely!
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Thank you!
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Wow, Hayley, it’s simply beautiful and touching. The last line got me!
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you liked it – your comment is much appreciated xx
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My pleasure, Hayley! Xx
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Like how the last word is given…
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Thank you – I tried to incorporate the acrostic use of ‘gift’ as the final word to end the poem – hope it worked 😉
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Quite lovely 🙂
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Thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you 🙂
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A few words, yet beautifully intense.
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Thank you! xx
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Wonderful…touching
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Thank you xx
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